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If you see this, congratulations, you've reached the end of the first year.

I've said this so many times already, but I am shocked when I realized that I am about to finish writing the first year,

Because I was so sure that NO ONE would really read this book, and I'd drop this halfway.

But no, you guys proved me wrong because y'all wanted me to write more of this book so here we are-

I've spent, like a year and a half (maybe even two) trying to finish the first year, and it kills me when I remembered that I had taken so long lmao.

With the 5 months delay on chapter 8 that left readers wondering in chapter 7, to now.

It may sound like I'm overreacting and celebrating as if it's now the ending of the book,

I'm sorry but I'm still shocked that I managed to finish the first year without dropping it or deleting it-

✎... deleted "scenes" from the first year

「Falling in Lava」
I didn't really write anything for this "scene" because it'd be too long if I did. So, I just left it there as an inspiration and a scrapped idea that I, supposedly, had for the first year.

The title isn't really a pun or anything (but big props to you if you did think of it as a pun when you first saw it) but I meant for it to be literal.

Like, literally falling in lava.

So what's this falling in lava thing that I didn't manage to squeeze in the first year? 

Well, this is an idea from tumblr that I got that makes the rooms and the castle floors turn into lava once a year.

This was supposed to show (Y/N)'s reflexes and how fast they are when it comes to these kinds of activities and events, but unfortunately, I don't think that it'll fit well with the story if I add it.

The reason why is because;

1. I would have to keep writing this lava thing every year and it would get repetitive and useless as the years pass by. This would also serve me as a plot convenience whenever I can't think of anything else to do or if (Y/N) needs something very important (because if you're the last person to survive, you get house points and a prize)

2. This is a weird way of showing (Y/N)'s high reflexes since it makes it look like it was just thrown in the activity as a way of letting them win. Blocking spells and testing the reflexes thing in DADA was better.

The whole fast reflexes and weird sub-abilities that (Y/N) gets, like singing to make other people obsessed with them, will be explained as we go further into the story so rest assured that it wouldn't be left out and made it seem like its a plot hole.

「Zeke and (Y/N)」
Now, you all know that Zeke is, supposedly, (Y/N)'s love interest ever since they were kids but you guys don't really know who he is yet because I haven't introduced him yet.

But all we know about him is that he's a muggle, (Y/N)'s neighbor ever since they were six and they like him.

I planned on showing a small flashback of (Y/N) and Zeke before (Y/N) left for Hogwarts but I didn't continue the idea because I felt like it was unnecessary,

and its an odd idea to just introduce Zeke in a dream when there's really no connection or a reason to show him there because he wasn't a part of (Y/N)'s isekai life yet when they came here.

There's a reason why I show you guys all these dreams and these flashbacks, and its because they're important soon as (Y/N) grows older.

Showing and introducing Zeke right now doesn't really improve anything or make (Y/N) more knowledgeable about their 'life' before they came to Hogwarts. They'll just go, "Oh so that's what Zeke looks like. Okay."

It was better to introduce him properly when he appears in the final chapter so yeah.

「Louis and the real life」

This was part of the scenes that I wanted to include in the final chapter of the first year but felt that it was unnecessary and won't make a lot of sense if I placed it.

It was supposed to show how Louis (the guy that likes you in the real world) is holding up while you were in a coma.

Yes, I confirm that the reader is in a coma while they're off in the Harry Potter world.

✎... my plans for the second year

Well, it'll be hard to not tell you guys any spoilers (because I can barely contain myself lmao) but I'll try to keep this as subtle as possible.

1. Things will get a little more serious on the second year. Of course, there'll be new simps for reader's yandere club, but this is mostly where the simps will start to do what they're best as yanderes. I've 'categorized' each yandere characters, from the one who goes all soft on you to the one who'll literally just torture you for no reason so yeah.

2. I've constantly teased about reader having a Hufflepuff friend by the second year, and I'm just really excited because he'll be one of the best characters to write, besides Alem, even though we don't have much information about him yet. Other than he's Newt and Tina's grandson. Though, I'm kind of sad that his role is not as significant in year two (he's prominent in year four, five and six).

3. Alem's character and role. I've always wanted to write Alem as more than just a siscon/brocon tsundere, not just a boy who's known as the reader's sibling. Despite being twins, they both have their differences and Alem's differences is what I'll be focusing on this year.

And no, I've said it before;
Alem will not be a yandere.

3. Past (Y/N)'s life and family. As we all know, reader has a twin brother, mentally stable parents, a butler, good neighbors and bratty elementary schoolmates (ha, I'll be explaining this in the first chapter of the second year). Though their full story will be explained by the third year, I'll try to build up the story of past (Y/N) in the second year through the early chapters.

4. Erised and the "familiar" figure. The figure is not a very prominent character and only appears once or twice in the early chapters, of course they'll be one of the major characters as we go through the story. Erised's story will also be built up in the second year so by the time the third year comes, everything will start to make sense.

And yes, I will upload a chapter about Erised's past.

5. Tom Riddle. That's all I have to say about this one lmao

6. Overall, just improve the slow burn that I have for this story and to try and be better when it comes to story writing. I personally don't think that my story writing is very great at the moment, so I need to work on that as well.

That's all for the other extra stuff, so let's move on to the "statistics"

Erised has gained 50k reads, 1.95k votes, and is placed 36th in the insanity tag.

That's honestly fucking insane, like-

Holy crap, I didn't even think it'd gain 50k reads because I assumed that no one reads yandere Harry Potter stories-

Honestly, thank you very much for this! I love you all, and I'm happy that you guys are liking how the book is going so far!

I'm open for criticisms, so please don't hesitate to point out things in my book! I'll take note of them.

Fanarts


KuraTile

Estatuesco

Ducky_Ducky_Ducks

I would just like to take a moment to say thank you to the people who sent me fanart! I get very giddy and do small happy dances when they sent me these-

iM OVERCOME WITH JOY, TO SAY THE LEAST.

If you can, please check them out and give them some love as well! They deserve every single love in the world ;;

Anyway, that's all I have to say in this A/N for now! Thank you, again, so much for reading the first year and I'll see you all again in year two,

Where everything just starts to go downhill.

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